Watch What You Say

WRITING TIP: Be careful how you word things. In this case, just one unnecessary word completely ruins the intention of what this person wanted to say.

Found this sentence recently on the Internet. It was posted by a person looking for a house to rent, and he/she sounded desperate:

“In need of a new place to live badly!”
 
One could (and should) take this as: “The place where I’m living badly now no longer meets my needs, so I’m looking for a new place in which to continue living badly.”
 
Wow, nothing like trying to improve your way of life! It would be better—and keep the intended meaning—if stated: “In need of a new place to live!” Simple and to the point.
 
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